Ya didn't say

Stupidly he stepped

Out

On

Thin

Half frozen Ice

She screamed

Asshole

Your going to get yourself killed

Everyone wants me dead anyway he responds

Really you don't belive that

Silence

Allright I'll join you she said

You want to die together he asked

There is no one I would rather die with

Here take my hand

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the construction and the sentimentalism is beautiful. Well done.

[The White Wolf]

This was very unique. The way you have constructed this is very different and I like it. The feeling behind it is very dark, somehow Romeo and Juliet like, and leaves the reader just wondering why. Very interesting, my friend.