Colours of Tomorrow

teary nights in this

blurry tea light glow

behind their eyes

are the colours 

of tomorrow  

sunny raindrops break

like chrystle.. 

blinding the ferryman 

deeply dancing dervish 

make silence of mary man

till that day comes 

till the second moon fades away

two lovers desperately  

wanting to stay 

teary nights in this

blurry tea light glow

behind their eyes

are the colours 

of tomorrow  

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

needs some slight editing, but like the repetition of the stanzas, like a dancing in the mirror effect...the lovers wanting to stay but disappearing into the glass...whirling into the reflection of the fading moon.