Moonlight flower bay

little song in the making

 

Oh baby you took me for a whirl

 but you were always

 someone else's girl

 

I knew things were a bit funny

darker days are turning sunny

this misty river overflows  

as the moonlight flower grows

I turn to you and say

baby let me

take you

far far away

then you turn to me and say

I love you and I'm gonna stay

this time this time

I'm gonna stay

this time this time

I'm gonna stay

in moonlight flower bay

in moonlight flower bay

in moonlight flower bay

this time this time

I'm gonna stay

this misty river overflows

as the moonlight flower grows

Oh baby you took me for a whirl

 but you were always

 someone else's girl

 

Reviews

[Corset]

you should put this to the music and post it , there is a free wave recorder so we can hear the melody, would love to hear the melody to this although it works as a wonderful poem on it's own.

[GiuseppesHeart]

Setting up a recording studio now...guess the melody,riffs and falsettos are invisible...
thank you sweetheart..

[Corset]

I bet it's awesome! :)