The Pretender

The Pretender

A Poem by A.
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Life with borderline personality disorder....

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Everything was made to be broken
And I'm trying, trying so hard
To hold the pieces
Not to cry, I can laugh
While the sharp pieces of my life
Stab my skin
And I want to die
Just to stop the pain inside
But no, I'm still holding the pieces of my life
I have to make them stick together
With my own hands,
Bleeding, trembling hands,
I need to survive,
I need to keep that smile on my face.

© 2009 A.


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This is increadibly writen. It really expresses the emotion and desperation and flows very well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The painful struggle comes through very powerfully
in the words of your poem. I can feel the pain
just by reading them. A very well written poem
as well.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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