Burnt heart

It's about your near and dear ones hurting you

All I did was love you with every fiber of my being

All you did was shove me with every fiber of your being,

I thought you were capable of caring about me

but you only were keen on tearing me apart

Why does it hurt every time I see you?

I want my heart to be free of your name

Your love is nothing but hatred of train

At last my heart has burnt into flames

Are you prepared to take the blame?

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

The bitter irony of love shines in this work.
It has been said, "Only those we deeply love can hurt us deeply."
If we do not care about them, we keep them at a safe distance from our heart.
Perhaps the key is forgiveness, tolerance, patience, faithfulness, and the desire to accept their flaws.
Love is an activity, not a mere feeling. In love we encounter all forms of the human condition. The way in which we react to the foibles of others, exposes our commitment to love.

[rulearcher]

Yeah true.

[Amaya]

I absolutely adore this poem. I can personally relate to it a lot, so amazing job describing the feelings of something like this.