love is blind

Sometimes we often blame others for our life,
We stab straight in their heart with a knife
Not knowing that they mean so much to us,
Clearing the negative and adding a plus
Deep down they struggle to talk,
But we avoid them and take another walk
Why is it that our loved ones hurt us the most?
Without them our life is full of ghost
Still we betray each other sometimes
We forget the beautiful evenings at nines
Trust is all we need
Heart is delicate, never let it bleed!
  - Rukaiya:)

Author's Note

I hope you all will appreciate my thoughts..umm im not very good at writing but i guess ypu kearn from your mistakes..and if there are any vocab errors or mistakes..plzz do let me know..ill be very happy for your response..do not hesitate to ask question :)

Reviews

[Sandra Nair]

Spectacular! Works which convey the current problems are what I love the most and you have done it through this fantastic poem. I just thought about my grandmother whom I often fights with. Though unknowingly, it makes her sad. Will never do it.

I would also like to post your poem in our group, ' Bharath Matha Ki jai' under your name. What is your opinion. As well, accept my friend request so that I can invite you to our group.

Keep going..dreams sky high..love beyond that!

Wishes,
Sandra.

[rukaiya JM]

Thnk you so much dear...yeah sure you can post my poem in your group...it'll truly add to my joy that more and more people read it...once again thnks fr ur wonderful replies...keep commenting..lots of love :)