when words can't tell about love

about a boy too scared to propose to the person he loves so dearly

WHEN WORDS CAN’T TELL ABOUT LOVE

 

Love that I give to you is a gift

That will by no means shift,

Because I give without regard for a price:

A love contritely sodden with sacrifice

 

In length: love that lives a life long’s time;

In word: love that is worthy a poet’s rhyme.

And be your servant to the point of slavery.

 

Love! Have us as a flock within the fold

Because in the cold lies those whose love is sold.

Hearts must discern the call of committed affection.

 

When love is given in earnest truth

Trust is born and stronger is the horn

From which this tenderness is blown.

 

Eyes can’t tell about love serve to stare

And if one, the express of words dare

Not to convey, can the minds meet?

 

But our love shall exist as a myth

And live in the commune of our souls,

The devotion of our pure hearts

And the converse of our innocent eyes

Reviews

[Mia]

You would be willing to give your everything for someone you love, the only protection you have is that they love you enough to never want you to give up your everything certain…and you are never really certain…that’s where the fear comes in, I think but you need to have faith in not just the words they say but the things they do. You need to have faith in your hearts choice. Such a beautiful privilege this poem is to me!

[MBUYISA]

if that girl is real, just send her this poem. she will definately like it and explain yourself

[Lydia Shutter]

The rhyme scheme in this one is charismatic. I ended up reading it aloud like a rap song. Not sure if you intended that or not. Yes, trust is necessary to keep love flowing...no doubt. Your words are wise and well written. lydi**

[Dhaye]

There are words which deserve to be told and there are some which should be kept untold. But examine your heart and your life...only you can determine when is the right time.
The last verse is great. Keep writing.

[rugare]

thank u dhaye, i really do appreciate