WHATS THE POINT?

A Love Story of the Humankind…

     All begins with a creator that longed for relationship. So the creator created the Earth with all the wondrous things on it. He was pleased but all the animals and plants could not fill the aque for love and relationship that he longed for. So with his bare hands he took the dust of the earth and created a human being, breathing the breath of life into him. As a creator his creation was perfect. Because how can a perfect creator create something imperfect? So the perfect creator named his perfect creation.  (Adam)

 Then the perfect creator saw that his perfect creation missed something important in his relationship.  So the creator put his creation to sleep and took one of his ribs from him, then like a surgeon closed him up. He took the rib in his hands and created another creation. Adam the first creation that was made by the perfect creator was walking in the garden witch the creator created for him. The creator brought his second creation to Adam and Adam started creating calling the second creation a WOW-man. And the woman became Adams wife.

ELO the creator was now satisfied with the relationship that he had created. The creator of Love now had someone to love.

But like in every story there is light and there is darkness. The woman was deserved and broke the only law the creator has placed. The story goes like this, ELO told that Adam not to eat of the tree in the middle of the garden, because If they would eat of it they would surly die. The serpent was the wisest animal, he deserved the woman by telling her that she will not die but become like God the creator. So she ate and gave to her husband and he ate. And so they died. The relationship that ELO created, their eyes were opened and they know understood darkness.

The creator went into the garden knowing what they have done but still seeking for them. He tried to communicate but only darkness came out of the creation. So the creator had no choice but to drive them out of the garden because they lacked the light and light cannot stay with darkness. All creation was torn away from the creator of love because of the darkness.

You may ask wat’s the point, well I will tell you. ELO made a decision the only way to restore the relationship is to die, willingly die. The most imberesing death on the cross. The bold lion creator coming to a dark world to restore the relationship that has ben torn apart lile flesh from meat. He had to come and become a humankind become a lamb. And so he did, and restored the unimaginable gap between him and his creation. But he did not just die, in three days he was Alive. To represent the resurrection of the relationship between us and him.

JESUS

    

 

Reviews

[WyndnWatr]

How does the title match the story? The title is grim and the story is full of hope.
Also, as I mentioned in another review, a bit of tweaking on your grammar and usage is in order.
Did I mention Keep Writing?
Ciao, ww

[Olga Rudyka]

if u read my story can u please leave a comment for me i would appreciate it thanks