A New World

In a place called imagination anything can happen,
and the harsh reality of life seem to fade away,
this is a place were dreams come true, and the magic of friendship never fails. where taking risks is fun and going back is not an option. you stretch for your goal and know that you will succeed, because you are the one in control. And sometimes you don't want to leave this world and you seem to day dream. the moment comes and you fall like a stone, with a great crash.

Reviews

[WyndnWatr]

This is a very poignant articulation of the comfort of our imaginations as opposed to the sometime harshness of our realities. It is so well done that anyone can relate to what you are conveying.
I am curious why you structured it with two opening sentences separated from the body of the following paragraph? "In a place called....life seems to fade away". Period. As you start "this is a place" that is a separate thought and sentence. I think "fall like a stone" or "fall like a rock" or something with implied gravity.....possibly even "meteor" would be better than "rocket" since, at least ideally, rockets rise and leave the earth in an upward direction. Or you could qualify "rocket" as a "failing" or "doomed" or "spent", just to show it's upward trajectory is now tragically turned around.
Your writing is evocative and heartfelt and no one should discourage you from continuing. mb

[Olga Rudyka]

I wanted the first 2 lines to stand out.