Pieces of words, feelings,
a teardrop, the sound of laughter.
The sun, the moon...
Night is day, day is night,
two sides of a coin, ever balancing each other out.
Woven in one, a piece of living breathing piece of work,
a tapestry of colours and sounds.
Yes, Even i thought about the Yin and Yan, I love the way you had gone ahead and painted your poem and I agree with Marina, when she mentioned, "This would be even greater if you did decide to expand on it as there is so much room to grow. A terrific idea, well done." Expand it if possible :).
What a great topic to write about, love the coloured font - gives strong impact. I had a vision of the yin & yang symbol as I read this. This would be even greater if you did decide to expand on it as there is so much room to grow. A terrific idea, well done.
- M