The Tapestry of Life

The Tapestry of Life

A Poem by Ruby Moon

Pieces of words, feelings,
a teardrop, the sound of laughter.
The sun, the moon...
Night is day, day is night,
two sides of a coin, ever balancing each other out.
Woven in one, a piece of living breathing piece of work,
a tapestry of colours and sounds.

The tapestry of life

© 2008 Ruby Moon


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O!
I love how you describe life.......the use of tapestry is very artistic....

colours and sounds......interwoven.....

lovely!

x,
O!

Posted 17 Years Ago


cute, it prolly could use some expanding but so far it sounds good
life is def a tapestry, a web, a masterpiece, unending, so much
lovely


Posted 17 Years Ago


Yes, Even i thought about the Yin and Yan, I love the way you had gone ahead and painted your poem and I agree with Marina, when she mentioned, "This would be even greater if you did decide to expand on it as there is so much room to grow. A terrific idea, well done." Expand it if possible :).

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a great topic to write about, love the coloured font - gives strong impact. I had a vision of the yin & yang symbol as I read this. This would be even greater if you did decide to expand on it as there is so much room to grow. A terrific idea, well done.
- M

Posted 17 Years Ago



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