Night Melody

The night sings with your love,

The stars shine bright,

However it still dulls compared to your love,

Nor feel as right…

 

The silver star at the sky,

Showers the moon with its light,

The moon next to it in the sky,

Bathed in the silver light, shine bright.

 

The two heavenly bodies,

Sway as one,

Dancing to melodies,

They hear as one…

 

Melodies of their love for one another,

Weaved into one for all to hear,

Lovers gather round to find one another,

And in their hearts, the melody they hear…

 

Reviews

[Fallenangeljc]

Leon Waltz Silverburg....That was the someone's name who had silver in it...

[LizLadyNinja]

Awww this was very touching!

The two heavenly bodies,
Sway as one,
Dancing to melodies,
They hear as one�

This part was very cool. I really liked this stanza the most. You have a style that is very neat. I really like this poem. Props to you.

[Ashly Christen]

The silver star at the sky,
Showers the moon with its light,
The moon next to it in the sky,
Bathed in the silver light, shine bright.

this is super sweet!!
full of love and devotion

[the ghost of pauls]

I have heard this siren's song before,
but ne'er sung so sweet.