Death

Death…

  A part of life

  A rest after a long journey

  The ending

  The beginning

  Just a tear

    In the thing we call reality

  Reality, a dream

  Death, the awaking

Grave, a place for those that remains

  To Mourn, to rejoice

  To cry, to laugh

Heaven, Hell, Fantasy

  Absent of God, presence of God

    Forgetfulness, remembrance

      One is all, all is one

        Death…

Life, death…

  Words…

 

Reviews

[The Autumn Faerie]

The title intrigued me to this piece
(Was looking for Shiny, and found Death..... Oh, the irony...)
I quite liked the format, and the message was very nicely portrayed!

[Sheri]

I like the way you have the poem formatted. As far as the whole subject of death, everyone has their own views on the subject. Espeacially if there really is an afterlife, whether or not there is rebirth, a heaven, a hell, or if it is just nothing. Another thinker. Great job!

[Niko Azazel]

heh! i wrote a poem about death once. i don't have it up though. *tear* this is good. i like how you set it up. it was nice. hehe ^_^ good work.