I love ribbons and cotton candies~

I love ribbons and cotton candies~

 

Ribbons in my hair and in my mouth, cotton candy…

A girl’s dream of sweet heaven…

Lovely long flowing ribbons, trailing after me,

Clouds so sweet and tasty,

Oh those angels, they’re lucky!

 

I love ribbons and cotton candies~

 

Ribbons round my wrists and in the air, cotton candy…

A woman’s dream of euphoric heaven…

Lovely long flowing ribbons, binding me

Making love so sweet and sinfully,

Oh those angels, they must envy!

 

I love ribbons and cotton candies~

Author's Note

Trying to convey the passing of time and how a sweet little girl can still love the same thing but in much different context. I dont think I did it well here... please bash and give suggestions and whatnots. This is a new version that my friend help modify ^-^ I like this version more~

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Wowserz. I definitely saw the two little girls that lived inside of one body. (haha?) Anyway, I liked how you did that. It's a nice poem. Good job with writing it!

[Weaza]

I think the poem actually did show the two personalities of the sweet young girl. Well writen, continue writing!

~Weaza~