The Deadly Sin of Lust

For the 7 deadly sins contest

Sitting on a barstool, I watch you eye me…

Crossing my legs slightly, I watch your eyes follow.

You’re making this so easy for me

Tonight, I will feed. I will sup on your desire

 

Sliding off the stool, skirt hiking up even more

I walk towards you. Want to dance?

Not bothering to hide my amusement at your stuttering

or the way you puff out with pride. Have your fun...

dear~ Come now, hands here... Sliding your hands to my hips

... and lower. Smiling charmingly, I flirt with you.

 

Teasing now, I slowly seduce your mind and body

Flaming your desire for me higher and higher, more

till this dance only adds to the agony of your throbbing want

 

Off the dance floor, no space for thoughts... perhaps except,

of how much you would like to slide close, into me

No space to breathe... the air on fire it seems to you.

Feeding off your desire I sparkle and shine, drawing even more eyes

You are mine now! No way to escape...

 

Away we go, somewhere alone... We slide into one another alright

You slide into me as I slide a knife between your ribs.

You have allowed yourself to sin, to fall to lust.

 

Reviews

[Ralphy]

Oh Ruby, you just blew me away. It was hot and steaming with great literacy, well within the bounds. I could feel each flowing moment, as we grew closer to the climax of this lustful wonder and then, bam, I was thrown for a loop. This actually is a brilliant write, and well worded.

[Taylor H]

Your not a bad writer! This is a great poem. I thought the last 2 lines got off beat but other then that they was really really good