Hold me close...

Welcome, come in my love…

 

Wrap yourself around me dear,

Hold me close… Keep me beside you

 

I doubt there is anything like being with you

So close together, almost one!

And yet… two individuals

 

Ever reaching and seeking to belong to each other

But by being ourselves, we give the most…

The most we can give to the each other,

IS by being ourselves

 

So ourselves we become, but…

Keep us from speaking, achieved our silence by kisses

Let us be quiet, letting only our hands speak to each other…

Sprinkle kisses, as numerous as the stars

Tracing an ever changing path, up and down seeking

 

Seeking for pleasure or for relief?

Which is which? Who knows or cares?

Maybe it is for comfort we seek…

Or merely the feel of each other

 

Let us stroke passion till it burns high and bright

Consuming all till only need is left

Need, burning… heating… joining

 

And after the peak… let it fade

Fade into embers of warmth

 

Let us stay here, tangled together my love

 

Reviews

[Angel Baby]

Wow, this is simply an awesome poem. I truly enjoyed it...will be going in my favorites. P.W.

[ShadowWolf]

Love is best tasted when it consumes all.

Boderline erotic? Mmmmm...is being intoxicate by love not erotic? It simply does not matter, love is what it is and meant to be enjoyed to the fullest extent.

[THE LOST ROSE]

"Let us stroke passion till it burns high and bright. Consuming all till only need is left. Need, burning� heating� joining" This is one of the hottest verse that I read since joining this site. I really enjoyed this pen and I will be back to witness some of your other great writes.

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful poem, a definite pleasure to read, thanks for sharing.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

lolz...yeah! I agree this is slightly erotic but more raw, warm and passionate.
According to me, these lines were most erotic -
"Let us stroke passion till it burns high and bright
Consuming all till only need is left
Need, burning� heating� joining"

and
"Seeking for pleasure or for relief?"

But the poem itself gives a very romantic feel while reading and I guess that was in your mind while writing it..
So, mission accomplished!

Great work, as always.