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A Poem by Ruby Moon
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Something churned out in about a min... no edits. The title is how I feel when that SOMEONE asked me to write it

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Duckie asked me to write this piece

and write I shall…

Me thinks it’s like raindrops falling

on a pond, ripples on still water

 

Disturbing the stillness, and yet bring peace

the sound of it, the looks of it,

the touch of water on skin…

the fresh smell of it

 

I guess I am stirred and yet calmed

Happy and anxious and yet waiting…

waiting for the right time

 

© 2008 Ruby Moon


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Very interesting imagery! Love your choice of words, its absolutely dreamy.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Good piece xx

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The Time will come when it is Time.

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