(^-^)

I’m waiting, hoping, praying

I dream of one day,

Won’dring

 

That someday you’ll find,

What you’re looking for

Would I still be smiling then?

 

Wishing you well...

 

Reviews

[Thais]

This is really good use of poetry. I didn't even stop to think about the won'dring part of it because it was just too good to stop. I would vote you first in one of my competitions if you entered. A good comp of mine is The Best of January 2008. It runs from the 1st to the 31st so you have a lot of time to still get entries in. Can you please tell your friends about the competition as well. I need and want more submissions. There are also a couple of others called Teen Romance and one about children's writing for all ages.

Anyways, lovely poem, won't forget it.

Love Thais xoxoxo

[Blue Sky]

a simple little piece

and yet it retains its own wonder, as one is won'dring
it holds a ringing to it, a lyric its own

very lovely, glad I read!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I really love these kinds of pieces a lot
simple yet vivid and damn powerful
came straight from your heart
An awesome read!!



-Bhavya

[MarieCo214]

For the most part, I really have no idea what to think. What's it about anyway? Oh wait, nevermind. I think I get it.
It's nice and short, that I liked. Other than that, I have nothing to say. The message isn't clicking in my head right now. Still, I kind of like it...maybe if I could get it. Now that I'm definitely sure of.
Good poem, just a little meaning. May I ask? What was your goal on this?

[CoraLeigh]

Great poem, no need to explain 'wondering', the writing explains itself. I like the simplicity of this piece and will visit you again.

[Sheri]

Would I still be smiling then? It makes me wonder whether or not this is a poem about wishing the best for someone, whether or not the outcome is to the poets liking. I think it's a good write. Keep it up!

[Marie]

Great work, Ruby. Really liked it.

[Fallenangeljc]

wishing...who......???