The right or wrong way

The right or wrong way

A Poem by Ruby Lio

Strange place, strange ways, each stay away!
Then why are there two roads to take?

The maps and paths, and followed tracks.
And Google, Waze, we trust their facts.
Turn left, turn right we let it steer.
To miss a turn, we start to fear.

Across to tolls, collect control.
Like little soldiers, do as told.
Planned flights and crowds, comfort in traps.
Are we confined in our skin wraps?

Some lost, pretend to just be found.
Some found, act lost, pretty profound.
To take that step, the unprotected. 
To turn towards, the unexpected.
A wasteful plan, we must forget it.
Insane repeat, and do we test it?

Misdirection, to find us love.
Misdirection, to find us trends.
Misdirection, finds ideas.
Misdirection, to find us friends.
Misdirection to free in stress.
Misdirection leaves no regrets.

Let one misdirection find you.
Let one misdirection guide you.
Let one misdirection define
And be the reason, you are you.

© 2017 Ruby Lio


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Some lost, pretend to just be found.
Some found, act lost, pretty profound.
That was my favorite couplet, it was complex and beautifully simple at the same time... loved it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I reckon I have had a lifetime of misdirection's Ruby but I seem to have survived. Great poem thanks for sharing. Rod.

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow i loved this poem it was very heartfelt i really enjoyed it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Nice idea! Life shouldn't always be planned, beauty lies in the unexpected.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great poem, Ruby! I can feel the thought and care in every word.
"Turn left, turn right we let it steer.
To miss a turn, we start to fear."

Has to be my favourite verse. You definitely can feel the anxiety building up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the way in which you write this composition..! I loved every word of this composition..! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Inspiring poem. :) very nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing words! They flow great, and a very nice consrant pattern.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for writing this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem . I look forward to seeing more from you .

Posted 7 Years Ago


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