White

This is what happens when I am bored and am staring at my browser layout for Firefox waaaaaaaay too long.

Black and Gray, they both go splat

like rainfall ‘gainst the wall;

bloodspray’s misting ‘cross the flat,

Red dripping ‘long the hall…

but White minds not at all…

she perseveres and then settles

for tulips in the spring;

But Death still twists her sweet petals

And traps her in Nothing.

Author's Note

This isn't supposed to be good work. So please don't read into it too deeply or anything. I wrote it in like, 3 minutes.

Reviews

[...]

but White minds not at all…
she perseveres and then settles
for tulips in the spring;
But Death still twists her sweet petals
And traps her in Nothing.

... there ... right there ... in those lines ... is exquisite poetry ... what a treat this poem is ... you wrote it in 3 minutes? ... i wouldn't be able to write anything close to this in 333 minutes! ...

[Michael X]

stunning imagery that reminds me of a burst of expression, colorful and vivid, lively and well done!

[Nina]

Still a good piece, you can still mess around with it and delve into the concept :3 I love it. "Red dripping 'long the hall but white minds not at all..." LOVE. IT. ^^