Keeping me from You

Steel grey sky

Blue glowing snow

Too deep for me.

 

Almost gone

Enough remains

Keeping me from you.

 

Fun at the start

Annoying in the middle

Aggravating now.

 

Snow, snow, snow

Blanket the ground

Kepping me from you.

 

 

Reviews

[Lady of the Lake]

I love this. It has great rhythm. Each stanza is constructed so well. If it were a song the chorus would be: "fun at the start ..."