Bittersweet

styrofoam heart

 

dark roast dreams

 

filled to the brim

 

emotions brewing

 

sweetened by your kiss

 

and lightened by your voice

 

let me savor you

 

until there’s nothing left

 

but the ground

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

One hell of the most lovable tapestry it is!

Beautiful choice of words (as always you come up with). Liked the foremost starting of the write that's well embarked with such words: "styrofoam heart". How ecstatic it is to a reader to read what a write bleeds in! Proper pattern, manifested words, Unfathomable kisses & the taste of emotions. Everything's well pen'd up across the page. Short. simple... yet thought provokingly phenomenal. Excellent work!

[rubie]

Thank you for your kind review.
Coffee and love. Two of my favorite things.

[Adam Adams]

I got this even I figured out, that's why you BREWED emotions. Lovely compositions. Well, Coffee, art, good-reading (poetry/novels) & a heap of free hours's all what am beloved with. So preciously , coffee & love-vibes're one of my TWO fav. things. Lol I've had a very great time with your poetry so... will be tickling you toes (reading you more stuffs) later on. So long xoxo

[rubie]

Thanks so much for your visit. Look forward to more.

[Adam Adams]

".. emotions brewing... sweetened by your kiss... " Strong words. There's surely a love hidden behind your words... which hustled you to write this piece. So deep. Heartfelt. Magnificent. soft. Touching. Melt-down... & seemed a bit light-heated (wt. lifting) as well. Sometimes, there's a pleasure in bittersweet love so, sometimes... there's bittersweet-ness even in love. Nice imagery you've come up with. Well done!

[rubie]

Thank you. This piece (as well as several of my other pieces) were inspired by a very special person in my life. So yes, you are spot-on. There is much love in between my lines.

Thank you for your wonderful review.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Now, I'm really excited...you love coffee, too! And FT is already a friend, mine too! How wonderful to feel this delighted in cyberspace!

I love everything about this...the small font is gorgeous, and allows your words to speak volumes. It's masterfully written, and there's nothing you could have done to make it read ANY better! As soon as I am able to "save to my library", I will...seems as though the WC gremlins have me in their mitts right now, but I'll return!

Take care, Rubie!

[rubie]

Looking forward to your return.
Thank you for the wonderful review....

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the sense that one fills the heart... a sweet kiss stirred into the mix... sipping from that cup until there is nothing but the ground... this is how love snares us, stirs us, and leaves us. A 'bittersweet' brew, Rubie!

[rubie]

Thank you for the review!

[Lydia Shutter]

Splendid metaphor! Elegant sensuality in every line! Loved this. Lydi**

[rubie]

Yes, I was really feeling it when I wrote this one. Glad you could tell.....
Thanks for all your reviews.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

As a lover of coffee I completely relate to this. I enjoyed. "Good to the last drop".

[rubie]

Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the write. Appreciate your words....

[Curtis Shannon]

Found the idea of comparing the experience to brewing a cup of coffee very intriguing.

"let me savor you

until there's nothing left

but the ground"

Trying to cling to someone and enjoy their presence as much as possible before they leave: one of the most wonderfully awful experiences someone can go through.

[rubie]

You understand perfectly what I tried to convey. Exactly what was on my mind....the need to savor and burn an experience into one's memory. Thank you so much for your perceptive review, and your kind words. Much appreciated.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wonderful metaphor using the coffee idea...and that styrofoam heart---soft, penetrable...nice filter for the dark roast dreams.

jacob

[rubie]

thank you for the review, and your kind words...much appreciated.