true

sometimes people realise this

I’ve closed the door of fears.

 

Now I know my way out and nothing stops me from finding it.

 

I am independence.

 

 

 

 

Everything is great as long as I’m having fun.

Reviews

[Emily B]

Somehow I think the huge "I Am" should be the beginning of this poem:

I am independence.
I've closed
the door of fears.
Now I know
my way out
and nothing stops me
from finding it.


But, then, it's wonderful just the way it is, too.

[x]

This is excellent.
In just a few simple words you have managed to put down the essence of great living and I so agree....life is for having fun and if you aren't laughing, you aren't doing it right.
Well done indeed.

[J.S. Pua]

good write..

[Ruth]

Nice wrap up hon!
"I am independence. "...excellent imagery:) xx

[Bella-Marie]

'True'.
What a great title! I didn't see how well you had paired the story and the title together until I read it three times over. I definitely agree with you. An excellent poem.

[azlamalo]

nice...thnx for sharing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wise words in this poem. We must enjoy our life. Living in misery leave us dead and no purpose. Poem is outstanding. No wasted words in this poem. Poem is the truth. I like the ending a lot..
Coyote