Blankets and more...

Blankets and more, snuggling tight.

I want to be with you every night.

I trust and believe every word that you say,

My life would be perfect if it stayed this way.

I can feel the magic flowing into the air,

And trying to look perfect I keep fixing my hair.

You keep telling me not to, again and again. 

But the movie starts, and the lights go dim.

"I love you" you whisper into my ear

Knowing that's exactly what I want to hear.

I'm not watching the movie, just thinking of you...

And I wish so bad...

for all this to be true. 

Reviews

[Edie Blue Starfish]

The title almost enhances the theme of the poem.
Like a security blanket.
There's deep rooted longing here.

[Reilly]

I love that angle! yes, thank you!

[Adam Latham]

My least favourite line is....ermmm....none of them!! I loved them all, chuckle. I think it's a delightful little poem and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :) Great stuff, well done.

[Reilly]

Thank you very much!!

[billyjf]

My least favorite line was line 8. I like your rhyming; even in lines 1, 2, 5, and 6.

[Reilly]

Thank you! I acutally wrote this 17 years ago, and for some reason popped in my head today, word for word. So if it seems amateur that is why :)