Unknown Judgement

Just something I wrote during break at work.

She looked deep into his eyes, as if she could see into his soul. Driven by fear he tried to look away but was caught, paralyzed by her piercing blue eyes and heavenly glow. She didn't even have to say a word for him to know the damage he had done. Weak at the knees he fought hard to stand tall. What was this power she had over him? A burning fire arose in the pit of his stomach, burning to his chest. He tried to speak, to say anything at all but could not. The look of disappointment and pain struck her face and a weird sensation dripped down from his eyes to his cheek. She was undoubtedly judging him for his crimes and sins…..was all lost?

Reviews

[Treatment angel]

Great story! beautifully written, and the ending let my imagination wander, which is my sort of ending.
You have lot's of potential. Good job!

[Ryan Riley]

Thank you!