Destiny

Days are numbered
Time is slow
The sand is falling
grain by grain
Embrace your destiny or
fall into your fate
Live to remember
As one has forgotten
The hands of the clock call
Fulfill your life or
call onto your death

Reviews

[FateDictates]

I've got back row tickets and red carpet ride, gonna enjoy this journey...

[Hellga]

where is rhythm in lines?... nice but shape is important too. it is poem.

[J.P. Bristow]

Short and sweet...as is life

[Brave girl]

oh wow,great way to describe the time left we have and cycle of life!!
great ink dear writer!!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Great way to define the time we have in this life......You wrote it very nice