notes to self

Thoughts from the notebook

I feel the burning through my soul
Rushing through my veins and firing up the coals
Pushing the willingness of my rage
Need to be locked in a cage
Need to get out through the door before I lose
and you hear my roar
Dark as the shadows of the night
My heart turns black to the sight
Hear my words they stab through like swords
Fear my fist something else to add to the list
Lock me in a cage
Tame my rage
Set me free and let me be

Reviews

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

This poem is beautiful or conflicting, and i feel like you are arguing with yourself...a rational side of you feels you should be locked away to prevent from hurting anyone but another side of you wants to be free so that you may exact your revenge. So much is expressed in such few lines and it is awesome.