Waltzing with the Wind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waltzing with the Wind

      “Rejoice while ye may…”

 

 

Autumn’s leaves of gold

          Shun the curse of Winter’s kiss

                    Waltzing with the wind

 

 

 

 

 

©2010 Richard Puetter

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Photographer: Flemming Christiansen.  Originally posted to Flickr as Nikon d40 pic 184.  This image, which was originally posted to Flickr, was uploaded to Wikimedia Commons using Flickr upload bot on 07:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC) by Sanfy (talk). On that date it was licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 Generic license.  The original image can be seen at http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Autumn_leaves_sceenario.jpg.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Very pretty imagery in this one. I love Autumn, it's my favorite season. The beautiful colors were seen in this poem even without the help of the colorful picture. Very well done and it feels so real and rhythmical, especially with the waltzing wind. Great job!

[luciddreamer]

Oh this was absolutely beautiful as well as the picture.....

Peace
Robin

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Rick, congrats on your great winning haiku.

Rick congrats once again, two awards for this wonderful haiku.

[deeps]

This is so lovely, I can feel the spring in this.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

At first glance, it is not immediately noticeable that this is a haiku. The image, the imagery, and your words are so beautiful that they resound most of all. For me, this is not usually the case with those who write haikus. The form seems to scream more loudly than the content, but you achieved just the opposite. For this, I thank you and give you great applause.

Keep shining!

Linda Marie Van Tassell

[cest la vie]

Beautiful.. and the picture is as stunning as your words.

Well done!!!

[spence]

This is a very nice haiku. It fits the image really well. I love the title and sub too, nice work, take care, spence