Waltzing with the Wind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waltzing with the Wind

      “Rejoice while ye may…”

 

 

Autumn’s leaves of gold

          Shun the curse of Winter’s kiss

                    Waltzing with the wind

 

 

 

 

 

©2010 Richard Puetter

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Photographer: Flemming Christiansen.  Originally posted to Flickr as Nikon d40 pic 184.  This image, which was originally posted to Flickr, was uploaded to Wikimedia Commons using Flickr upload bot on 07:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC) by Sanfy (talk). On that date it was licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 Generic license.  The original image can be seen at http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Autumn_leaves_sceenario.jpg.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Very pretty imagery in this one. I love Autumn, it's my favorite season. The beautiful colors were seen in this poem even without the help of the colorful picture. Very well done and it feels so real and rhythmical, especially with the waltzing wind. Great job!

[Fran Marie]

a most beautiful presented haiku indeed ..........well expressed in poetic verse

[wordwarrior]

Hoe=w very beautiful Rick. I am in awe of those who can write such an excellent haiku as this. Your aha moment really made me sigh...waltzing with the wind...mmmmm
The whole poem is delicately penned, yet the scourge of winter is still evident.
Clever writing indeed.

[Angi]

Lovely little haiku! Fall is my favorite season. I wish it could be fall always! Angi~

[Yellow Butterfly]

You have captured the very essence and beauty of a beautify Autumnal day in this gorgeous Haiku..

One of my favourites of our four seasons....

Well penned.. :O)

[Legion]

'Tis awesome in its splendor. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!

[Archia]

This was so veru beautiful, just absolutely beautiful.

[Brianna Brie]

This is a great Haiku. Flows very well.

[ice]

Excellent!
I am happy that other people notice the nuances of nature the way I do sometimes...The picture is of Beech leaves, that sometimes retain their leaves all winter, which fits your verse perfectly. Funny, I just put a poem up with the title "Beech Leaves..only this poem is way more compact.

enjoyed