New Day

Courage!

 

Have faith, battered heart

 

      Sun’s rays herald bright new day

 

           Golden horizons!

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Third time is the charm. Congrats!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Looks like Congratulations are in order again.

[beefjerky]

all i can say is W- O- W!!! you are an amazing writer! great write...

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning Haiku! Beautiful!

[Alaska Frost]

Excellent haiku!! It truly captures the moment of a new day and gives hope. Thanks for entering :)
-Alaska

[Scott Free]

Ah, this really is haiku at it's best.
You really capture the heart of the element without giving boring description--as I see in many haikus.
The pic helped too.
Great read!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Good poem with vivid imagery.

Sal

[Brenda Sue]

Beautiful haiku!!!!! With a message of so much hope!!! Great job.

[emmajoy]

Beautiful words, beautiful haiku, emotions to the fore if not imagination working.

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Great haiku! It contains many different possible meanings too. It could signify that there is always a tomorrow that can erase the pain of the day that precedes it, it could signify life after death, rebirth, renewal, and it's quite beautiful in imagery to boot.

Fantastic!