Egg within an egg

Egg within an egg

A Poem by Rick Puetter
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Zen haiku

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   Egg within an egg

                 …Zen haiku by Rick Puetter



 

Egg within an egg

Children of infinity

Mirror in mirror

 

 


 

©2013 Richard Puetter

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Photographer: Rickroma78. License: Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic.  This image has been modified from the original.  The original image can be seen at http://www.flickr.com/photos/rickroma78/6162989341/sizes/o/in/photostream/.

© 2014 Rick Puetter


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Dear Rick,

Your poem truly is a powerful parcel of Zen wisdom, in a wonderful representation of the Haiku form. Mixing Zen with Haiku is the perfect marriage of philosophy and poetic form. I especially liked your line "Children of Infinity." You have really crafted a moving depiction of the creation of life with this poem. Beautifully written, my friend.

A short story for you: I remember my mother hard boiling and peeling an egg like this after we were finished using it for an Easter Egg Hunt. I also remember her quartering peppers one Sunday, and finding a perfectly formed miniature within the larger pepper.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Interesting piece. Things are always more than they seem. Even matter isn't as solid as it appears. Our senses deceive us all the time with everything from optical illusions to philosophical interpretations. Science is no more exact than philosophy in my perspective. Philosophy deals with ideals and imagination. It takes imagination to think outside the box and imagine that the "facts" are not set in stone. There are are no immutable axioms. Physics only pertains to a given set of circumstances and even "reality" can be altered. I believe the mind and heart to operate the same as books and parachutes...in that they only work when they're open.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick Puetter

10 Years Ago

Hi Fabian,

Not been around WC much and finally commenting on your review. I guess you'.. read more
Very interesting Rick...thought provoking for sure...i'm sure through meditation we can find out many things we don't know about ourselves...our mind,body and spirit....Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, this makes a change from you! A brilliant haiku. Certainly deals with a huge subject! I think I might pin that up by my desk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear Rick!

When an egg is within an egg, there is perpetual children of creation, as one egg shall create a new egg which creates a new egg ad infinitum as children of infinity. Mirror in mirror reflects forever and ever as the image would reflect one to the other for all time - the reflection never ending. The philosophy of Zen in your haiku would tell me to look within oneself and see infinity through meditation - there is no end, nor is there a beginning, and I''ll stop there as you know we differ in this view........lol

Best Regards,
Sheila

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

Today, I cannot find words. Sheila, good, good.
Rick Puetter

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheila. I think you got the drift of my poem perfectly. And I don't think we differ as much.. read more
You contain an entire universe with your words...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This got the wheels of my mind spinning...egg within an egg! The infinite universe.....spiritual and well written. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 28, 2013
Last Updated on November 19, 2014
Tags: Zen, haiku, creation, infinity, Universe, existence, philosophy

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Rick Puetter
Rick Puetter

San Diego, CA



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So what's the most important thing to say about myself? I guess the overarching aspect of my personality is that I am a scientist, an astrophysicist to be precise. Not that I am touting science.. more..

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