If I were a wise man

If I were a wise man

A Poem by Rick Puetter
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Reflections after making some serious mistakes...

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If I were a wise man

 

     …More important than being rich--Reflections after making some serious mistakes...


 

If I were a wise man

I would try to see the things to which I am blind

If I were a wise man

I would wait and not act in haste

 

If I were a wise man

I would try to see all sides of an issue

If I were a wise man

I would not be so easily influenced

 

If I were a wise man

I would stop to think about what I value

If I were a wise man

These would be the things I don’t forget

 

If I were a wise man

I would try to see the repercussions of my actions

If I were a wise man

My life would be lighter and with fewer regrets

 

If I were a wise man…

 

 

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There is a problem I see with this Rick and that is that wisdom has not been defined. Is wisdom to be taken as a weighing up of the facts and coming to the best outcome? Apart from our intellectual powers which we use to come to decisions in a logical way we are also human and driven by irrational emotions. Should we give money to a beggar - logically the answer may be no, but our emotions may say yes. Having said that I would choose to have empathetic wisdom!
Thought provoking as ever.
All the best.
Alan

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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If only we could be so ambitious, as this lithe poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wisely done. I enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. I like this one! I'd love to be someone without regrets as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


"More important than being rich"

This tells me........... you are...

Thanks for sharing



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick Puetter

11 Years Ago

I am rich in many ways, much more than financially, but I am okay there as well. Worked hard, well e.. read more
WOW! I Love this! I love the structure, the word usuage! EVERYTHING! Thanks so much for not keeping this to yourself! Mind checking out some of my stuff? Thanks
~HSA (High School)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vertigoingnowhere

11 Years Ago

*usage
'If' indeed!
You've got me thinking...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the ethical tone of this.

If I were a wise man, i'd enjoy simply the man I am.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wisdom often comes from regret. I have to say it is with lament we find ourselves then learn the truth. He who never tries never achieves never learns .You try yourself and you risk your pride.Your wisdom will be heartfelt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

if, 20-18 the best is always in front.

Posted 11 Years Ago


it's very nice. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 17, 2012
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Tags: life, values, judgement, wisdom, philosophy

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Rick Puetter
Rick Puetter

San Diego, CA



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