Oh, Rose!

Modified from "Tovli's TEN" contest entry

http://www.public-domain-image.com/plants/flowers/rose/slides/red-rose.jpg.  This is a free, public-domain image.

 

 

Oh, Rose!

 

     …Wonderful scent and color--a marvel!

 

Oh, precious Rose--such sweet perfume!

Your splendid presence--sensual oblivion!

So pure--clearer than a rain-washed sky!

Serene--you meld my senses.

Merciful--your healing balm of scent and color!

Oh, Rose, you hold bold wonder for both nose and eye!

 

 

© 2012, by Richard Puetter

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Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Sometimes, the happiest we can be is when we appreciate the simplest things in life. A little lilting breeze, the sight of the sun setting, or just a single rose. Your poem brings out that delight on seeing things with an eye of interest, curiosity and kindness. Although I think this poem is hiding a deeper meaning, and the Rose might allude to the woman you love as well. Even if it doesn't, it stands tall as a poem on its own. Thank you for sharing :)

[Ladysue]

What an utterly beautiful poem Rick.. :)

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Ladysue,

How wonderful to hear from you, and thank you for your kind review. I would normally send a private thank you, but your profile is closed.

Dear Lady, we miss you on WritersCafe. Would you consider coming back and blessing us once again with your presence?

My very best regards,

Rick

[Ladysue]

Hi Rick, it was good to read you again. Not sure if I will be back. Have a fabulous weekend! :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

You have done a marvelous job with the challenge! You capture the magic of the rose.

[Leslie Philibert]

I know Rick`s writing, which is always well done,and this is technically excellent,I like the half phrases and the good working of the theme, excellent.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Absolutely beautiful Richard :)

[Tate Morgan]

So different for you .I like it shows your softer side

[*** Hey Jude***]

Such truths shared in this ten word contest. You have captured the magnificence of the rose in a mere ten words superbly.
I love all flowers, and the rose you picked for this poem is amazing. Very nice! ~ :-)

[Helen Crutchett]

I thought I had lost this write! Simply gorgeous Rick. Loved the formation of this poem and how you included the 'ten'. I could almost smell the fragrance of this Rose, and that wasn't just because of the beautiful picture!

Helena

[Sheila Kline]

Hi Rick!

Yes! The rose is a marvel with its lovely fragrance, symbol of gift of love, or peace, or friendship depending on the color, and the colors are almost as varied as the colors of the rainbow! There are countless varieties, including the hybrids, the heirloom, the miniature, and on and on......gives us so much to admire!

You have indeed described this magnificent flower with finesse and given it worthy praise! And, excellent job in using the ten words!!

Best Regards,

Sheila

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

A most wonderful write.