being with you

When I'm with you

so many feelings spew

you and I almost one and the same

you and I are no game

hopefully you'll be mine

for it is I who loves you fine
now I'll try to do my part

while I let you control my heart

Reviews

[Roxi L]

this was good. I dont like rhyming poems eather.
Roxi
Writing keeps the dream alive

[nono]

I understand they should rhyme. But I hate rhyming a poem can be just as good without it. I like this it's beautiful nice job!

[~Lizzy♬]

Awe! I love this. (I know who this is for too.) *smiles* Keep up the romance poems, they make me smile! :)

~Lizzy~