Life

O what is life

something of joy or of strife

is ity fun? is it fair?

is it about the clothes or is it hair

it causes pains

it drives us insane

it gives us laughter

but tears soon come after

it gives us gains

and also losses

it makes us strain

and gives us bosses

we love it, we hate it

we agree with it and debate it

is it like being at the point of a knife

or do we call it life

Reviews

[~BlueSkyy~]

Love it :)

[nono]

Oh, I think life is whatever you make of it... :D You can't ever actually know. That would ruin everything the whole why are we here? thing. I like this it expresses much that is yet to be figured out. My speculations on life are whatever you want it to be. Spend life in prison, or spend it actually doing something. Nice job!

[~Lizzy♬]

Love the emotion and the words in this poem. IMY RICHIE!!! :)

~Lizzy~