for you

for you an ode to you

for without you my skies aren't blue

why you ask is it you

when you are near my tears are few

when you come by my voice is a pitch of high

without you i might die

no not her or she

but it is you who completes me

they say you're ugly and cruel

but you. . . . .you are a jewel

for you it is hard and tough

for you are a diamond in the rough

what is it that i must do
to gain the trust from you

please tell me, tell me true

for tis i who loves you

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Very endearing and touching poem. Loved it!

[MoonlightIce]

Aw very sweet!(:

[Dark Empress]

Aw, this is so sweet. I really like it. :) Great write.

[Dreamer<3]

This is really good! I can definitely feel the feeling behind it. Suuuper good(:

[Blossom]

this is sweet!! who is it for by the way? I'm curious.

[~Lizzy♬]

I love this so much! :) Who is this "you" that this poem is for? (Just wondering if there is anything behind it.)

Keep up the good work, see you on Sunday! :)

Love you Romeo,
~Lizzy~