A story about you and me

Its a beautiful story

A story about you and me
In a lovely paradise
I was there
You were there
We both were there

I felt that magical wind
I heard that melody of nightingale
I enjoyed that cherry blossom of your smile
I looked at that blue sky which had your name
I smelled that flower which had your fragrance

The romance was too far from happening
The separation we had was very saddening
The moments we lived will never come back
The unspoken words not meant to look back
 We were meant to be good friends

Reviews

[RABIN]

Hi, I hope viewer would like my first poem on writerscafe. I would appreciate reviews in order to improve my writings in future. Thank you.

[Dakshta]

A really beautifuly written poem :)

but a bit too many exclamation marks :)

[RABIN]

Thank you for wonderful suggestion, I have removed exclamation marks now. Really appreciated Dakshta.

[Dakshta]

most welcome :)