Little Needles

Little Needles

A Poem by spaghettihands
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A piece about purpose.

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like the needle of a compass
we're steered by the things to which 
we are attracted

tiny needles each with their own north
and by necessity their own detested south
and to test our willingness to move
to the northernmost source

distractions from the east and west 
vie for our single iron spike of attention
wiggling, wobbling, trembling, nearly
completely falling

until the gravity of the situation
snaps it back in line
to point us in the direction
we we will live our lives
until we finally achieve 
destination

© 2015 spaghettihands


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really nice metaphor here....at times we are much like a compass with distracted needle, and we can't seem to point ourselves in the right direction.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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spaghettihands
spaghettihands

San Jose, CA



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17 year old aspiring English major. I like to write poetry and read books along with playing video games and other teenage stuff. more..

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