::Sorry I Loved You::

Roses are red,
Too much has been said.

 

 

Violets are blue,
We are now through.

 

 

I thought our vows
Were sacred and true,

 

 

But I know now
They were nothing to you.

 

 

You think I don't know,
And that you can hide,

 

 

But now I'm just sorry
I was ever your bride.

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

Though I am sure humour was not your aim in this poem,
I however find humour in the first stanza:
'Roses are red, too much has been said.'
This line challenges the cliche associated with Valentine's day.

But at the same time I see the serious concept
you depict in this poem.

WELL DONE

[Jeanette]

Thank you!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

This is beautiful , sad actually

[Jeanette]

Thanks.

[ewest1220]

I agree with other Ethan here Ouch! But I like the tone and also love the ending. Well done!

[no sun]

Ouch! A tough subject but so very well written! Loved the ending!

[Jeanette]

Thanks Ethan! :)

[HopelessRomantic]

Wow that was an amazing ending

[Jeanette]

Haha, wow, thanks! Its kind of a true story, cept I wrote it in highschool, at least 6 years before it happened.. :)

[HopelessRomantic]

wow that's amazing

[Harley (arbiter)]

Woad you can tell the future Lol where will I be 6 years from now XD sorry just had to

[Jeanette]

You, my dear Harwee, will be in Cali, chillin with the circus peeps. And you WILL be happy.... understand?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Woah mindblown Lol Yes I understand

[Jeanette]

Good boy! Now that you know you'll be happy in the future, it's makes 'right now' not so bad right? =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

............................I got confused

[Jeanette]

If you don't have to worry about your future, then you can sit back and relax. Don't worry about today, cuz tomorrow will be amazing! =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oooooooooooooooooooooooh

[Jeanette]

Why are you so easy to confuse Harwee? =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I don't know. Heh "that's why I'm me and you're you and that's why I love you"

[Jeanette]

Lmao... awesome... Im LOVED!! wooohooooo!

[Richy Moon]

(Respectful) *Laughter*
All jokes set aside, I love how you a new twist on an old saying. It is a good piece of writing, and I like it.

[Jeanette]

Thanks! I appreciate it. =)

[Whiskurz]

This was a beautifully written poem although sad.....Well penned my friend......Whisk

[Harley (arbiter)]

I liked this one! Haha funny yet sadish. Great job!

[Jeanette]

Not to burst your balloon... but how is this funny?
3 conversations... can we handle this? =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes! Because 3 is my favorite number and because it's like "Hey f u I don't want you anymore take this: poem power!" Lol

[Jeanette]

Ohhh... I see. =) My fav # is 37. =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Huah! 3 and 7 combined into 1 number! *mind implosion*

[Jeanette]

Oh no! Your poor mind!! I guess trying to have 37 convos at once is out of the question... darn! =(

[Harley (arbiter)]

Name my mind implodes on a regular basis

[Jeanette]

Awww... poor poor poor Harwee... does he ride the short bus? What color is your helmet? Let me guess, PURPLE... you should let me send you some cute stickers to put on it! Then you'll be the cool kid. ;)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Huah! Stickers?!?! I love stickers!

[Jeanette]

You made me lol again....

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh no not again. This is madness. Wait no. This isn't madness. THIS. IS. SPARTA!

[Jeanette]

Tell me that you've heard "The Mean Kitty Song".... bout a kitty named Sparta? Please... tell me you've heard it. I'm begging you...

[Harley (arbiter)]

I have! I think! Heh

[Jeanette]

Really?? Don't say it just cuz I begged...

[Harley (arbiter)]

No I haven't seen it. I wonder if anyone's whatching these conversations? Hellllooo?

[Jeanette]

Ha... like it's not hard enough to have 3 conversations... Now ya wanna add a 3rd person?? Gawd that sounds like FUN.... HELLLLLOOOOO, anyone out there? We are friendly, we promise!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

We come with promises of twix and oreos. no no that's a lie. There our candy!

[Jeanette]

Oh Oh Oh.... I have stickers!!!



Harwee...? I think we might be abusing the 'new features'....?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Lol just maybe. But rules where meant to be broken! They said a delorean couldn't travel time

[Jeanette]

Who is this "THEY".... and why must they LIE??

[Harley (arbiter)]

They are the cucumbers of solitaire. And they lie because there mean!

[♥ Kinnixk]

Mwahaha I am a third person! :D And I love Sparta the little kitty :3

[Harley (arbiter)]

And I still have no idea of the Kitty. I was talking about the movie 300

[Jeanette]

Hell yeah!! A 3rd, plus a Sparta lover... effing AWESOME!!! =)

[Jeanette]

I know, but Sparta kitty is better!! Go to youtube and search "The Mean Kitty Song"... like now Harwee!

[♥ Kinnixk]

xD I love that song! :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes! I will! But 300 was Awesome.

[Jeanette]

Me too... Plus Mr. Saftey is kinda HOT...lol. =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

what if my stupid phone wont load youtube....

[Jeanette]

ill post the video to my profile... can you see it that way?

[Harley (arbiter)]

i should. i can get youre playlist. maybe

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

HA! FOURTH PERSON! Weren't expecting THAT, were ya?! PS LOVE LOVE LOVE SPARTA KITTY!

[Jeanette]

Sa-weeet!! 4 people and counting... so aweome!

Video is up Harwee.. WATCH IT!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

actually i was expecting about 50 people to pop up but thats ok too!

[Harley (arbiter)]

yes mam

[Harley (arbiter)]

its funny i liked it buuuuuuut 300 is better

[♥ Kinnixk]

haha 4 people! WOO! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Swimming is fun

[Jeanette]

No need to brag to the person suffering 100+ degree weather Harwee...lol.
My pool got tore up last year... I miss it. =(

[Harley (arbiter)]

!!!! Sorry! Come on down here! You'll always be welcome to swim in ours!

[Jeanette]

*grabbing my PURPLE towel*

I'm on my way!!!!!

[Jeanette]

S**t... I'm stuck in the desert? Fancy a road trip Harwee?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Remember our deal. Al long as you can pay for gas I'll be there

[Freckled Princess]

This is madness.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Madness? This isn't madness. THIS. IS. SPARTA!!!!

[Jeanette]

Sparta Kitty!!!! Yay... =)

[Jeanette]

Gas money!?!?!? I don't remember that in the deal at all!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. If I had to come to Cali and get ya on purpose you would pay for the gas

[Freckled Princess]

I love that song..

[Jeanette]

See Harwee? Sparta Kitty IS BETTER!! And, that was NEVER in the deal... but I'm willing to negociate... I guess...lol.

[♥ Kinnixk]

Which is good, right? xD mwahaha, madness.

[Harley (arbiter)]

It is NOT better. Women like it better anti realise I might have just offended a lot of people sooooooo and Yes. That was the deal. You're Hyundai breaking down. The circus. Buzzard and snake.

[Jeanette]

So I can bring buzzy and Mr. Slithers... and the freak show, but I have to pay for gas?

[Jeanette]

FYI: Harley claims to be insane... however, he is really just silly. =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes. That was the deal and isn't it kinda the same thing?

[Jeanette]

Insanity is sorta reserved for murderous mania.... =)
Fine, deal... I'm waiting.....

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well it'll be a few hours Lol maybe days..... Arkansas to Cali......

[Harley (arbiter)]

And does playing halo cea count as murderous mania? Because no enemy is left alive muhaha

[Jeanette]

Video games don't technically count as murder... But maybe if you stabbed a homeless guy in an alley, cuz he tried to steal your shoelaces.... maybe, maybe.... that would count. But then you'd have to admit to murder in front of all 4 of us... and hope we don't turn you in. =)

So if you really want to be 'insane'... that is your option! lol

[Harley (arbiter)]

That's a very descriptive.... description. Uh.... did you stab a homeless guy in an alley Cuzco he tried to steal You're shoelaces?

[Jeanette]

Nah... I was wearing flip-flops.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh so he tried to steal you're flip flops?

[Jeanette]

No... I was walking down the alley. He's all like "Hey, I like your tattoos!" I said thanks... Then he asked me if I had any piercings? I said yeah... He asked me how many? I said 13. He's like but I only see 5. And Im like yeah, well the others are hidden. And he's like I wanna see!.. and I'm like NO!... And he's like YES, and I'm like NO!!... So he grabbed my arm, and tried to push me down, and then I pulled out my pepper spray and sprayed him... and when he fell... he landed on a pencil that some kid left behind after doing his homework in the alley. And it was hard to run away in flip-flops.....

[Harley (arbiter)]

O_O. Uh OK then... that's Nice...weird hobo

[Jeanette]

Do you know any 'normal' hobos?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yes actually

[Jeanette]

Well that's nice to know...
How come it feels like this s**t just got real?

[Harley (arbiter)]

Idk..................wait what?

[Jeanette]

I thought that was a funny story... now it feels all serious now... like heavy man...

[Harley (arbiter)]

...are you high? And if Yes why aren't you sharing XD

[Jeanette]

Wow....