::Lost Expressions::

I want to be empty.
I want to be free.
I need some compassion,
a reason to Be.

 

 

I have a heart,
I have a mind.
But nothing to share
with someone kind.

 

 

Emotions racing at the speed of light,

but no expression or way out in sight.

 

 

A reason to care
has eluded me,
for the people who judge
but will not see.

 

 

I feel like your honeybee,
worker, but never queen.
I feel like Im used, abused,
and never truly seen.

 

 

Will I ever be loved,

a pawn in your plot to survive.
Im tired of settling,

and just living to be alive.

Reviews

[Lindsay T]

This is beautifully crafted, you express your images really well and I can get a mental picture of what your trying to tell readers. Nice job.

[Eagle Cruagh]

The only one who is loved in
this world is the lover.

[RachelReaper]

As the poem when on, I could relate to it more and more, and I think that's one of the best qualities a poem can have is the ability to relate to it.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like it. Everyone can relate probably. Great. Kept it little simple and I like that

[BLBrown]

Congrats on a lovely poem. I think most people can identify. I like the structure of this, makes it more readable. And you aren't getting overly flowing with the words...simple but powerful.