Drained soul

Down to grain, and love so soft.

Ripped my heart to make no mends,

Selfish to the point of greed.

Make's me think how i might succeed, you drained my soul to worthless scraps.

Burn's insight of thought's to remember, All worth is all that's lost. 

Draped the cover's over my skin, to make it dark as were i go,

Pain shout's out as i die. As the light passes threw my eye's,

I see no love i see only shadows.

To the greatest part's to make me shine,

is the the time i shut my eyes to see a cloud of glory and a sight to remember.

Author's Note

I wrote this in the remember of my first love.

Reviews

[samantha munning]

pain comes in all forms and is different for everyone
this is well written and speaks from the heart

[LuciaMarie]

I can really feel the emotion of this in this piece, and when most people remember their first love they tend to have similar thoughts and feelings.