Heart of Stone

 

Burning all my blood stained shirts

From where you wanted me to hurt

Do you have a heart of dirt?

 

I stared down at the bloody gash

from where my head was banged and bashed

Do you have a heart of trash?

 

Dark deep melodies begin to drone

Out from your heart and to my bones

Do you have a heart of stone?

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

This is a very strong and dark poem.I like it. The constant question asking keeps the reader entertained and helps them get a feel of who the person saying these things is. Great job and thanks for submitting.

[Kasey Jones]

I like how you ended each stanza with a question. I can feel the passion in this.

[Dream Weaver]

Very vivid and all to surreal, nice write
on a bad subject...

[azlamalo]

I like this one