Dying

A Poem by Cadence Killday

They all left

because they knew

I was so far gone

that I was through.

All I need

to know from you

is would or will

you leave me too?

© 2010 Cadence Killday

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Lively

A very lovely poem...

Posted 13 Years Ago

Angie Diane♥&hea..

I love it!!! I think this one is amazing. I love the question. I think of it sometimes. I liked the way it is expressed. I can relate to it as well. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Megg

Wow! This is really short but I love the emotion. The rhyme scheme is strong and I can totally relate to the poem. Great job! -- XOXO Megg

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 7, 2010
Last Updated on June 7, 2010

Author

Cadence Killday

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I'm Cadence and I'm 19 years old. I play violin and guitar and write poetry. If you review one of my poems I will always do my best to return the favor. more..