Boys with Apple Hearts

All of those from Adam

It's logic I can't fathom.

You bit into my apple heart

Heartbreak, pain; I had them.

 

Manipulate with perfect skin

Accusing me of your own sin

Yet I'm still struck by cupid's dart

And wasted by you again.

 

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Amazing! A short poem that is going in my favorites list. I also wrote a poem in my book
Titled, “Evolution of Eve.” One line it says, “A part of Adam’s rib, yet the irony
Is she doesn’t want him…inside of her.” Your poem also takes that feel, that
Adam and Eve, women caused sin, but man enticed us. Excellent!

[Anas]

haha this was good, I like it good job :)

[eli mercuree rue]

I think it's interesting the way the human brain functions in relation to stress. It seems like once we have had an unpleasant experience that we ought to know what to stay away from, but like all things in nature we repeat these vicious cycles and we are more victim than not.

So uh the poem itself leaves room for one to draw their own judgements and i quite enjoy poetry of this sort.

The punctuation along with the rhyming creates a very good rhythm.

Good job.

-LE