The Affliction

A streak of pain, the blackness shone
Misery is pounding in my skull
Nostalgia and the past bemoan
And now depression fills my soul.
Grasping with it's stubborn hands
It twists and breaks my spirit,
throws it across the Devil's land,
The afflliction - I can hear it.

Author's Note

not really set on the title yet.

Reviews

[azlamalo]

Great flow..and its put together well :) thnx for sharing

[Christy]

I can relate and new exactly what you were telling me. I wanted it to continue and I like the title!

[J.Keyes]

Your writing is very good. The emotion is amazing and I can really feel the poem. Keep on writing, I can't wait to read more of your poems.