rope swing

 

 

un expected

heart heat and flushing.

her eyes, the warm pool,

her smile the rope swing.

 

grinning grabbing the

sunshine

rays,

between branches leafed

patterned glow,

 

with one glimpse,

the ride through the wind

brings

the moment in air

h

e

l

d

still,

motion less,

but soft,

her skins lush scent.

 

giddy

holler,

into

the

embrace

of her

presence,

her exhale tangible within the waters surface,

 

and I (want another)

swing,

 

even though

I just had my turn,

and I’m still,

soaked

he(in)r.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Beautiful poem. Lovely words, I find that this piece`s written in 2008 .. sounds interesting! Umm .. it`s seemed you`ve been away from this site since the long years. Anyway, glad to know that over this site, there`s too many talented writers surviving and yeah ... i`m pleased to know, you`ve been here since long. Hope to read your new stuffs if anytime you plan to drop at all. All the best and yeah, Welcome back if you come back to this site!

Take care!

[Kara Emily Krantz]

ahhhhhhhhhh oh goodness this is incredible :) yay yay yay

eecummings reminiscent, but dont worry - in your very own voice and beauty.

i guess i'll just have to favorite this

'grinning grabbing thesunshine rays,"

yes yes yes
and the ending? beautiful perfect creative fantastic

[Heather Angelika Dooley]

I absolutely love your signature "layout" of poetry. It is so refreshing to see someone carry their own style without any hesitation. You are a pioneer of poetry!