Big Smile

Big Smile

A Poem by Ross Davison

 

“Blue.           Daddy’s Blue….
 
                Orange…….                       yellow.”
 
                       with a giggle
 
“Oh,       you meant the light on daddy’s face………………….from the T.V.”
 
“Yes.
                  Blue…..                        Yellow.”
 
“O.k.        o.k.                                 I Love You.
                                    Now go to sleep.”
 
 
 
“Blue.”
 
“Me Me.”
                                                   
 
breath
 
 
touch my chin and cheek
 
 
“Red.”
 
  laughing          “Sleep!”
 
“Blue.”
 
 
Kiss nose
 
“Me Me.”            big smile
 
 
 
“Orange.”
 
 

© 2008 Ross Davison


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this is so cool because it's really godd and I'm in it. . .

Posted 17 Years Ago


This is really touching. It is photorealism in poetry as well, you can visualize the children and the light on the father's face, and hear them in 3-d sound.

Posted 18 Years Ago


dude this is truly awesome. your use of structure here completely serves it's purpose. as i scrolled down i heard voices in both ears...
insane. :-D
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Posted 18 Years Ago


this was great. i wanted more, though. reminded me of sleepovers, silly things we thought were hilarious and parents from the other room screaming to be quiet and go to bed. classic.

Posted 18 Years Ago


A haha I love it that blue moment flicker flicker how long did the code take:) rad for patience and thanks for the beautiful familiar blue seconds flicker flicker...light and lovely

Posted 18 Years Ago



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Added on March 20, 2008

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Ross Davison
Ross Davison

New Bedford, MA



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Born on Cape Cod, and transported from school to school, I began writing at 15. Twisting the way the words layed on the paper, spreading them out to accentuate pauses or connections. I've been publi.. more..

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