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waterways

waterways

A Poem by rosieect
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nineteen years // how i fell apart

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The pressing weight of

Other people’s expectations

Sit heavy on my shoulders

Like Atlas

Bearing the weight of the world for eternity


I feel like I am slowly sinking into

A mire of quicksand

Blended with concrete 

I’m locked in

But I am still sinking


Years of my life

Stripped away 

Like paint thinner on old walls 

I curl and fall to the floor 


Some days I feel 

Like a rock worn away by the river

Stagnated in place 

As each day wears a deeper groove into my side


Other days

I am the once great waterway

Now reduced to underground pipes and rocky spillways 

In a concrete jungle 

© 2017 rosieect


Author's Note

rosieect
september 2016- I like this one and the metaphor, unsure about how it's laid out

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Added on August 12, 2017
Last Updated on August 12, 2017
Tags: water, urban, depression, recovery, healing

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rosieect
rosieect

New Zealand



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kind of sad, trying to get over it. not 100% sure if poetry is something I'm good at or not. more..

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A Poem by rosieect