In the Rift

In the Rift

A Poem by Rosie Brooklin
"

I've had dreams about dying for the past two nights. It might be my time

"
Yesterday, I buckled my seatbelt
Today, I took a shower.
Death is no longer appealing to me
But it's a nearby looming tower

Why is it that when I can finally waltz
With pure joy, hope, and love
That death decides to stop the music
And ensnare my soul from up above.

When the waltz is over, I want you to know
That I never thought I would dance again.
You were the rainbow after a storm
You are a sky I can die in.

© 2020 Rosie Brooklin


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Hey this is such a good poem from you Rosie. From your poems I got to know that you're in a state of frustration or somewhat like that. So please keep writing and posting and everything is gonna be okay someday :)
Best wishes from my side

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet and romantic. :0)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

124 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 6, 2020
Last Updated on September 6, 2020

Author

Rosie Brooklin
Rosie Brooklin

TN



About
I am an aspiring writer with a passion for many different forms of art. These include literature, poetry, drawing, and music. I'm always willing to critique and looking for critiques, so feel free to .. more..

Writing