Stained Glass

Stained Glass

A Poem by Rosie Brooklin
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I know I switched up rhyme schemes; I'm bored and didn't really give a damn

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Never apologize for sharing your past with me;
for telling me about the lives you've loved the most.
We all carry a fragment of them with us,
creating the stained glass windows of our souls.

Hate is the only transgression worth apologizing for,
Because it cracks our windows and devours us whole
As time goes on, and the colors fade
I've learned the ones we love are the ones we grow to hate.

I have no time for malice; I have no room for grudges,
Because my chapel is slowly dying as the bricks begin to crumble
I only care about my soul, that it should stay intact
My stained glass window can not break, my love will always last.

© 2020 Rosie Brooklin


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Does the rhyme scheme need to be perfect? Many is the time mine hasn't been. I say go with the flow. Hate is a very destructive emotion. Best not to go there. I have found though that the people who can cause you most grief can be family members. Stick at it and take a chill pill, I have been there. I enjoyed the read. This is a nicely composed poem.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really enjoyed this, it is not being selfish but just protecting our souls and really our health.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful and honest words shared Rosie.
"I have no time for malice; I have no room for grudges,
Because my chapel is slowly dying as the bricks begin to crumble
I only care about my soul, that it should stay intact
My stained glass window can not break, my love will always last."
I love and I understand the above lines. Holding malice and grudges, weight us down. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreaming about dying, while not hugely uplifting, is much more preferable than the real thing
At least that's what I've heard
somewhere

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its a very awesome piece if i can say...so many beautiful phrases

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write
Yes the way is less clear than once was
My strength both physical and mental is weakening
I keep the stained glass window clean
Outwards all appears fine

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and the soul is the most important thing to be concerned about

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Does the rhyme scheme need to be perfect? Many is the time mine hasn't been. I say go with the flow. Hate is a very destructive emotion. Best not to go there. I have found though that the people who can cause you most grief can be family members. Stick at it and take a chill pill, I have been there. I enjoyed the read. This is a nicely composed poem.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rosie Brooklin
Rosie Brooklin

TN



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I am an aspiring writer with a passion for many different forms of art. These include literature, poetry, drawing, and music. I'm always willing to critique and looking for critiques, so feel free to .. more..

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