Celebrations

Yet another morning,

Yet another day.

But is there something unusual about this day?

Sun smiling wider,

Clouds showing almost every color.

Trees tapping their roots and

Shaking their leaves.

Winds flowing with a greater speed,

as though in a hurry to reach some suite.

Butterflies spreading their colorful wings,

Birds singing hymns in  winds.

Everyone's celebrating in joy of your come,

Wishing you enjoy it and have tons of fun.

Happy Birthday !

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

If this is meant to be a cutesy Birthday wish, then by all means, it's really great. But as Poetry, it falls a bit short.

The first stanza is a cliche.. a good one nonetheless. 'Clouds showing almost every color' is, I'm sorry, a bad imagery. However, the following stanza is very good (That is the kind of imagery and wording I aspire to). The second last stanza is again a cliche. And it should be 'joy of your coming' (I understand you wanted it to rhyme, but you can't mess with grammar my dear). And perhaps 'Wishing you TO enjoy' or 'Wishing you COULD enjoy it' would be grammatically better.

I'm terribly sorry if this was too harsh on you. But I believe pointing out the mistakes is a must. So please try to take this as positive as possible. And to the person concerned, Happy Birthday!

Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the places you took me in the poem. I enjoyed the complete birthday poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[RG]

Thank you for your review Coyote :)

[Praveeta]

Lovely and cheerful poem.

[RG]

Thank you :)

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[dontwakeme]

ahhh...this melted my heart!

[Michael X]

flight of a fancy destination, this poem graps the ultimate purpose for
which something is created or intended, intended as the emotion
evoked by well-being, success wished upon another, the good fortune
by the prospect of possessing what one desires to express,
a joyful birthday wish, this poem is gleefully expressed, perfect job ^_^

[Leslie Philibert]

Fun poem with a lot of good lines, well written.